Iya Ythmir

Thank you very much for the critique. :wink: Although this is a stand alone piece, a short story if it could be placed in that category. I will proceed to ...

Something I submitted for an Art Appreciation class. It's supposed to be a self-portrait of sorts but I figured that fitting my life story into a short one wouldn't really ...

"So, you want the lady who's not wearing brassiere to go out and greet them?" :oops: I was being sarcastic to my mom.

No. Two days ago, I did one. I managed to pull through. :D TPBM would give almost anything for bittersweet chocolate.

Telling is important too, only that showing has a far greater importance than telling. Telling has its place once in a while of course. Too much of it somehow makes ...

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Writing is the best. Just writing and writing. The thrill of it is indescribable. :D

I agree with what deafwriter said. James Patterson's books are awesome and I love the suspense it builds up. At first, I was apprehensive of reading a book that switched ...

I plan my characters a bit... enough to suit what I need to get the first chapter going and to get a gist of the entire story. Although I need ...

Your story is great! I love how it ends and all the gory details that I had to go through. However, it seems somehow dragging around the middle. It could ...

:D I like it! When I read the entire thing and saw the picture at the end, the whole story sort of just flashed through my mind. I second what ...

I like it. Very casual and yet with the way she's talking, I somehow had the feel that what she was talking about something really serious. It feels as if ...

It has loads of potential. No, scratch that - tons and heaps and truckfulls of it. I can almost connect to the character, poor thing. Only (and this is one ...

I really liked it. Gripping. Although somehow, the big paragraphs of yours could be broken into little paragraphs for more clarity. With the way it is, it somehow jumps from ...